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Monday, 8 July 2013

More Super Writing

Tawera and Dominic did some super writing about Maui.
They have also re-told the story of How Maui Slowed the Sun.


The sun was going too fast so Maui made a plan.
They went to where the sun lived. 
They made a wall so the sun wouldn't see them. 
The sun said to Maui, "I will go slowly." 
Maui went back to the village. 
They were happy.
Tawera


This is the story of Maui catching the sun.
The sun was going too fast. Maui had an idea.
He made ropes and caught the sun.
Dominic

1 comment:

  1. Super Wow Tawera. Your writing and story is really good. You have done such a great job. We love you and are really proud of you. Keep up all your good work. From Nana Dee

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